Long Essay: Global Village, Learning to Live Together
Here is my sample essay to show how a subject can be stretched to a length of 3000 or more words. There are ideas that are given extra (undue) space, e.g. Holocaust, to show how some ideas can be used as fillers if one is short of arguments. Have a read and leave a comment so that I can gauge the effectiveness of my writing.
Global
Village: Learning to Live Together
by Fatima
Batool
Dr Shashi Tharoor, a
prominent Indian parliamentarian, debated the case “This house believes Britain
owes reparations to her former colonies” initiated by Oxford Union. Dr
Tharoor’s side won the controversial debate with 185 votes to 56. The OxfordUnion
published the debate on YouTube in 2015; since then the video has been watched by
more than 4.7 million, liked by eighty-nine thousand, and shared by thousands on
social media. The Union channel has been subscribed by more than
three-hundred-fifty-four thousand subscribers, while the views it has received
on its different videos are in billions. Today humanity lives in a world where
Facebook, YouTube, Twitter, Whatsaap, Pinterest and Wikipedia have become the
buzzwords. Undoubtedly, the reader him/herself must have frequently accessed these
along with many other social- and web-sites. The same words would not have rung
a bell even in the last decade of twentieth century. Today’s world aka global
village is formed on an intricately weaved network of optic-fiber cables that
have made it a well-connected place, giving billions of its inhabitants an unbelievable
opportunity to live simultaneously on earth and in (cyber) space.
Oxford Dictionary defines
Global Village: “A single community linked by telecommunications.” It is a
world in which information and telecommunication technologies (ICT) have a
key-role to perform. Unlike globalization that is defined as a process that
enables organizations and businesses to develop international influence, particularly
in international markets, it is the inter-connectivity of people, bringing them
close to the point where they can extract information and extend communication
without any time-lapse. The technological revolution has led to the development
of a cyber-community and a cyber-market, which has been unprecedented in human
history.
United Press
International (UPI) reports (2017) that out of 7.6 billion people more than 3.58
billion people, forty-eight percent of the total world population, are internet
users. The UN reported in 2016, that the percentage of internet users stood at
45.9, 3.4 billion. Europe, with eighty percent of its people online, has the
highest rate of connectivity while Africa, with some twenty-two percent of online
users, has the lowest rate of online connectivity. Besides, Asia has the
highest number of offline population, a total of sixty-two percent of the
offline population – China and India are the largest internet markets. Although
half of the world population is still offline, the time is near when everyone
will ensure his/her virtual presence. CNN reported, five years ago, in 2013, the
claim of Eric Schmidt, Google Executive Chairman: “Everybody in the world will
be online within seven years, by 2020.”
Transforming
the globe into a village means that its inhabitants are well-connected,
well-acquainted with one another. This global community has surpassed many
challenges, particularly that of distance. Now, people from the under-developed
world, even if only twenty-two percent from Africa, can connect with their
counterparts residing in the developed world. There has been a time when people
living in one part of the world had no clue of the people living in another
part. Since the earliest civilizations of Ggantija, 8000 BC, to the more recent
civilizations of Mesopotamia and Egypt, 3100 BC, humanity has trod a long path
that includes marvelous inventions, like rafts and ideograms, and splendid discoveries,
like fire and geomagnetism. The early civilizations had no clue of one another’s
existence; travelling for discovering the land was followed by trading for
better prospects of living. Those who had an interaction with foreigner were
few; fewer ever stepped on a foreign land. One of the earliest pursuits of
humans, after forming into cities, has been the discovery of other human
colonies. Thus, connecting the dots of human presence to the point where they were
joined to form the all-encompassing map of the world, thus taking the load off Atlas’
bare shoulders. Today’s world is encompassed by a cyber-space, an omnipresent
phenomenon, which brings to the table even the remotest, the farthest, the
strangest of the lands and their inhabitants. Information is abundant; communication
easy and socialization handy. Today one’s friends are not the ones s/he knows
personally but everyone/anyone who shares a common interest.
The
foundation of a global civilization was laid with the greatest geographical
discovery: America. It was the discovery of a new continent in fifteenth century
(1492) that put forth the idea of a worldwide, global civilization which was to
be further developed under the umbrella of colonialism. While the Spanish
civilization managed to go as far as Latin America, it was British legacy that
reached everywhere: Africa, Australia, Canada, India and New Zealand. British
Empire remained the throbbing heart of the world for roughly three hundred
years. Even the common element of a colonial master, instead of shortening the
distance between different communities, widened the gap between the people,
dividing them on the basis of intellectual, technological, cultural and racial,
and economic features. The very incident of Dr Tharoor’s flying to London for
participating in a debate is a salient feature of this global world; however, the
very popularity of his vitriol on a social media website is a testimony to the
fact that his censure echoed through millions of hearts (millions reciprocated
the same feeling). His voice, along with the video, reaching to millions who
took interest in the subject marks the emergence of a global community that
pays heed to every voice that rises and embraces everyone in its infinity.
There is a room for everyone: be it the one who delivered the harangue, or the
ones who shared the video, or the ones who endorsed it with their appreciative
comments, or the ones who out-rightly rejected the narrative of South. The
bottom line is: Empire writes back!
In
the meanwhile two poles apart civilizations strengthened their grip on the
world, stretching the world into two poles: American capitalism and Russian
communism. When the superpowers were conspiring to design a new world order, the
technologists were burning the midnight oil to improve the computing system,
which was going to change the world for better, and communication technologies,
that have made possible the transport of information and culture across the
globe, not to mention the overseas transport of one’s image through this network
during a video call. This web goes farther than the British Empire and feels
stronger than the capitalist pull.
However,
setting aside the historical landmarks, if technological change is made the
pivot, socio-cultural evolution, a term used by Gerhard Lenski, takes place,
dividing human experience of living together in five societies defined by the
kind of technology they had, with each society changing with the new technology
that it designed or received. First, hunting and gathering societies, more than
12000 years ago, relied on simple tools – the stone-knife, the spear, bow and
arrow – to hunt down animals and gather vegetation for survival. Family was the
driving force of this society. Then, horticultural and pastoral society, some
10,000 to 12,000 years ago, developed horticulture that used manual tools for
plantation, replacing food picking with food cultivation. The regions where it
was difficult to grow food developed pastoralism, the domestication of animals.
It was horticulturalists who quickly multiplied in number and who extended the
settlements with trade. Still the world has societies that practice both horticultural
and pastoral techniques – South America, Africa and Asia, but now they are virtually
connected with the more developed parts.
Some
500 years ago, civilization dawned with the revolutionary techniques like harnessing
of plows by animals, canalization of rivers for cultivation, invention of wheel
for transportation, usage of metals in weapons and utensils and the formulation
of writing and numbers. The two-million squares mile long Roman Empire, in 100
BC, was agrarian with a population of seventy million. This was the time when
“high culture” emerged, making some eligible for “refined” activities and
others for hard physical labor. The emergence of distinct religious, political
and economic groups led to city-state with a loosening family system. With
large machines driven by various sources of energy, the fourth type of society,
the industrial society, began making traditional values weaker and work ethics
stronger. Most people got the chance of, if not “refined” learning, schooling
which slightly decreased the social inequality. Throughout these epochs,
Aristotle’s social animal learnt about his/her surroundings, devised ways to
cope up with temperate change, geographical variations, economic disparities,
ideological clashes and social differences while they continued multiplying in
number, outnumbering all mammals on the face of earth and having only brown
rats, domestic chickens and some insects as their rivals in number.
With
the passage of time, the number of inventions superseded the number of
discoveries as scientists uncovered most of the planet earth. With better
understanding of the world comes the better ability of benefitting from what is
known and is now more persuading and yielding than any political or religious
ideology that ever existed. Inventions coming out one after another have
completely changed the way Homo sapiens, the frog in the well, hoped to survive
as the fittest; now it is the smartest. Daniel Bell (1973) gave the idea of
post-industrialism: “The production of information using technology”. The
post-industrial society relies on computer; digital data is saved via binary
coding. From the ideogram to the signifier to the binary language, not only
human ways of communication but also ways of socialization have evolved. This
Information Revolution has enabled a worldwide flow of information, products
and people which resultantly has devised the idea of a global community and a
global market.
Taking under the
microscope, the way people living in the US interact with one another or/and
across the world would be helpful in understanding the extent to which the ICTs
have improvised the ways modern societies live. Statista, a leading provider of
market and consumer data, maintains that almost eighty percent of internet
users in the US have a profile on social media while the number of social
network users was expected to increase from one-hundred-and-eighty million in
2015 to two-hundred-million in 2019. After Facebook, the most widely used
social media sites, Youtube, Twitter and Pinterest are some of the most popular
social media sites. In terms of customer satisfaction in the US, Pinterest, the
visual social sharing platform, is ranked first, followed by Wikipedia and
YouTube. This is only the US. The rest of the world is equally receptive to these
global trends.
Sir
Edward Burnett Taylor, the British anthropologist who founded cultural anthropology,
in his book Primitive Culture (1871),
under the influence of Darwin’s Theory of Evolution, developed the idea of
cultural evolution, from primitive to modern. His definition of culture
includes everything, from knowledge to laws to habits, that a man acquires from
the society he lives in. His study of culture underpins not only the artistic,
spiritual and moral achievements but also technological accomplishments. Interestingly,
the cultural evolution has reached its pinnacle with post-industrial society
that benefits from high-technology culture. The gadgets that an eager child
inattentively operates today would have needed a properly trained technical staff
for its operations a generation ago. Technological know-how is inherited just
like cultural understanding.
Today’s
human being is not only enjoying better prospects of living but also a better understanding
of his/her whereabouts, with the world in his/her palm. As a matter of fact,
s/he does not have to experience xenophobia, the social fear; in the wake of
global village the fear of the foreigner ended with the development of better acquaintedness
of the neighbors, be of next door or next continent. Racial identity which once
led to ethnic identity is now replaced by a global identity, which enables one
person to standup for another person even if the two have never known each
other, even if the two are from different races, even if the two are from different
regions of the world.
Comparing
the world that exists today with the one that existed some 70 years ago would
be helpful in drawing an understanding of the landmarks of global village. The frequently
witnessed protest of the international community on the plight of humanity, be
it ethnic cleansing or genocide, is one instance of an extended human community
which is formed on the basis of humanity that transcends all identities, be it
national, racial, ethnic, religious or cultural. When in 1930s Hitler was
forcing Jews, living in different parts of Europe, to move to concentration camps,
the people living in Europe relied on newspaper and radio to develop a picture
of what was happening on international and national front, not knowing the misery
that crept into the lives of Jews and gradually swept the peace of their lives away.
Fear was lurking in the hearts, fear of the unknown, fear of remote places. Nobody,
not even Jews, knew where they were heading to. The people living in remote
parts of the world, say sub-continent which sent its people to the great world war,
had no knowledge of what was happening. The forced migration aka ethnic
cleansing of Jews led to their mass murder. Millions of Jews were subjected to
gas chambers and liquefied into soap; experiments were performed with anomalous
medicines, new medical procedures were tried. Jews were abused, tormented,
tortured and even gunned because they had a belief which was disapproved by the
Führer, leader. The war ended,
Nazis retired, allied forces arrived, and left-over Jews, three million, were rescued,
but years passed till the world could actually find out what had happened to
the Jews. It was not until 1960 that “The Final Solution” of the Nazis was
replaced by “The Holocaust”, the genocide of six million European Jews in
Second World War. The response of the international community at the greatest
tragedy in the history of humanity took years to generate partly because of the
long distance between places and partly because of the slouch methods of communication.
Today Burmese Citizenship Law does not
acknowledge those Rohingyas as citizens who migrated after 1823. It was then
that the British government allowed mass migration within India, and the flux
of laborers that Myanmar experienced then was later termed by the Burma
government as “illegal”. Last year when the Buddhist government asked the
Rohingyan minorities, including a large chunk of Muslims, to leave the country,
followed by extreme military measures, not only the Muslims living across the
world but everyone knew what was happening. The international community raised
its voice against this crime against humanity, persuading Myanmar defacto
leader Aung San Suu Kyi, a Nobel laureate, to stop this persecution. The ethnic
cleansing of hundreds of thousands of people who have been living in Rohingya
for three generations (some ninety-three years) has been reported throughout
the world, watched and disapproved by millions. The world came to know of the
crime as soon as it started to take place. Petitions were signed; photographs
were shared; videos were made; banners were uploaded: the world disapproved the
suppression of the minority and raised its voice for the violation of basic
human rights (how in/effective that voice proved in political realm is a
separate issue). Cherry on top is the way these modern-day platforms have
empowered journalism, both print and electronic, with the ability to stay
informed all the time and to keep their ‘followers’ informed.
In this global village the pace at which information is
shared, relations are developed, purchases are made, causes are joined and
ideas are propagated has been unprecedented in human history. For the first
time the world has been exposed to infinite possibilities of living, with
better prospects of shaping the world and developing a shared culture. With the
help of mobile technologies, say, smartphone and tablets, one can get access to
any information from any location while social sites like Facebook make
communication and collaboration instantaneous. The citizens of this global
community are more empowered and more united whether they have to propagate a
political message, arrange a rally, organize a conference, generate a donation
or run an NGO. Interestingly, when the famous pop-singer Rihanna was featured
in an advert “Would You Rather” slap Rihanna or Punch Chris Brown by the
social-media app Snapchat, she posted about the unethical advert on her
Instagram and asked her followers to leave the app, dropping company shares by
a 5 percent overnight.
The global village is all about a virtual
bond between human beings who are connected through a network that brings them
close despite the distance between them, giving an opportunity to understand
one another’s grievances better. The
way demise of Stephen Hawkins is grieved, assassination of Benazir Bhutto is condemned,
Forty Rules of Loves is cherished, education
of Malala Yousafzai is supported, victimization of women is shamed, emancipation
of third-gender is endorsed, Right to Education is propagated and Child-labor is disapproved by the international community are examples of better-connectivity
and better-receptivity of the global community.
In
this global village, one opens a window that takes her/him to a world of
possibilities. A world where learning is a piece of cake and knowing is a child’s
play. With one touch of the finger one can virtually transport her/his image to
remote places. Real relations are complemented with virtual ties. The virtual-self
mostly treads the path unknown to the real-self. Blogs and Vlogs, e-books and
audio-books, forums and messengers, online teaching and online distance
learning, e-doctors and e-counseling: the contemporary world has devised new
ways of living its old habits. This socially integrated unit fully understands its rights
and frequently unites for mutual benefit. When Netflix, a steaming service,
announced increase in its pricing, 82,000 comments were made on various social
platforms; after the instantaneous response of the viewers, the company lost
two-third of its market share (800,000 subscribers). Speed is the specialty of
this global village: the speed with which news/information travels and with
which feedback emerges. Services are subscribed, products are
shipped, groups are joined, admissions are acquired and scholarships attained
without covering any distance physically.
When
in 1964, Marshal McLuhan predicted a global village, it was a ground-breaking
idea. “Today, after more than a century of electric technology,” McLuhan wrote
in his book Understanding Media, “we have extended our central nervous
system itself in a global embrace, abolishing both space and time as far as our
planet is concerned. He was the first to recognize the social effects of global
village, a carefully-picked insightful term, where in real-time one part of the
world can experience the events happening in another part of the world. Media, communication and technology
have been rapidly, constantly changing the world; in less than twenty years it
has transformed the global milieu; in another twenty years one can hardly
imagine where it would take the global community. However, one thing is sure:
this village is a place where its inhabitants are still learning to live
together, to support one another and to fight for the greatest cause of Humanity.
A day will come when the whole world will show up online and celebrate the
triumph of humanity over medium and media, going beyond creed, color, region an
race, flying above fences, boundaries, jurisdictions and borders.
The End
Awesome maa'm It is a great help to your virtual students. Please maa'm do make a sample essay category in your blog.
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Ma'am first underlined passage is introduction & last underlined passage is conclusion?
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& lastly is it excellent that we add "Outline" heading & put on some main points there, that defines what we're going to write in your essay?
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This essay does not address the topic itself. It doesn't show how world is a global village and how we should live together. It is more focused on ancient history that is irrelevant. Contemporary issues or main issues are focused but in the 2nd last paragraph which i believe should be main subject of discussion in the whole essay.
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